My try to add some Cyber to the punk :D

 

"All sorts of animals walked by here, from large Hippos to small weasels. Most were still natural, but some had cybernetic implants, either to upgrade their existence, like the advertisements overhead promoted, or because they had lost a limb or a claw in former accidents. At the nearest food stall, a tiger with a bionic tail stood waiting. His tail, stronger, more durable, fulfilled all the practices a natural did. No, it exceeded them all. A couple of meters further, a snowy owl with half of its beak metal intimately leaned against a stall. It spoke with a coyote that had a cybernetic eye. Usually, they have high-quality vision and fast reaction times, though the scar on his eyelid tells us that his eye probably had to be replaced. The cybernetic eye seemed of poor quality; the green glow was weak and blinked infrequently. That's the bad part about the cybernetic world: get a fake or badly maintained upgrade and basically screw yourself over with a malfunctioning body "

 

I will add sprinkles of this all round the story - overhaul characters and conversations, interactions and environments ONCE AGAIN Yeaaahaa.

but that is the cool part abt writing- see your story and environment change over the time ^^

 

& because I love you guys here some eye candy.

 

Like shadow through night, 

a force full of might, 

shine darkness with light, 

the monsters to fight, 

and danger to kite. 

 

So run little one run of in quick flight, 

So misused by worlds, 

and abused unright, 

 

Now, dash out of sight ,

in to sunlight, 

let it shine bright,

on your sore fur in plight

 

 brought us the weight of our own words 

bought off the guilt, 

thought us what hurt.

Hey, glad to tell you that I'm back! Working on the Lore of Coreline - one could say I work on Lorecine! I am super impressed by the sudden progress and new ideas that I've got. Taking the weekend really helped me focus on myself, and therefore, I've been getting new and better ideas! Most of the plot holes that I have struggled to fill have led me to understand what was needed! I'm not sure if I should post it or not because it’s an explanation for the whole story so far and ALL the past lore of Coreline ALL conflicts, and how the City even evolved to grow the way it did, with MAYOR spoilers. SUUUUUUUUUUUUUPER interesting and SO much COOL lore... stuff that's super cool to know, but not like explained in the book, because for time reasons ... one without spoilers would be this: 

 

 

Growing labs Now you might be wondering, where do wood, fruit, or herbs come from... In a city that is completely concrete? Good question, so there are these so-called “growing labs” Here, for example, wood can be grown at 100x the speed. Genetically manipulated to take in minerals way faster, it can extend its normal growth too. This, however, came at the cost of a lifetime. This wood often starts to mold after a few years, especially if it's exposed to moisture. The life expectancy is about 7 years for a single wooden plank. That's why the city is built entirely with stone or steel and why most of the wood is moldy or of poor quality.